From this afternoon's open feedback session- in regards to the development of our work, background research and final product, feedback delivered by fellow students...
ISSUES RAISED
-why use purple, what is it for? with the moustaches, could you have your drawings of the famous people with them?
-confused
-nicely crafted
-try categorising the taches into relevant groups?
-who is it for? restricted audience
-promotion? possibly packaging?
-what is the point in it? other than being visually LOVELY
(^^ i liked that person!^^)
ACTION TO BE TAKEN
-try some categories
-maybe think about typeface- not too sure about coloured counters
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I think that part of the confusion caused with my work was the way I had organised it to be viewed without labelling effectively. I had placed my original design outcome to the left, with my new (slightly lacking in work thus far!) design outcome to the right, both designs showing the progression of how I have reached the conclusion I am now at, therefore, people weren't to know which design outcome I was decided upon.
Despite this, I was very pleased with my feedback- nothing too negative, and completely constructive- all points ones I have considered and still, am considering now.
CATEGORISATION...
*much like my original final outcome idea, I am probably going to categorise my swatch books in alphabetical order, however, I may explore the possibility of categorising them by exsiting moustache types (though I believe this may cause more confusion?)
WHO IS THIS FOR...
*make that clear in my promotion- poster design.
*the product, itself will be somewhat restricted due to the moustache aspect- a limited, niche group of fans- but avid ones at that.
PROMOTION...
*again, unclear at this stage. in my original final outcome I intended to design for product and packaging, but now I aim to make a poster (though this, of course, was unclear at this stage with both products on view...)
WHAT IS THE POINT...
*as stated on box and throughout designs.
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